This is a very roughly written short story about two people who were in
love in High School but separated by circumstances. Thirty years later
they meet, by accident, and realise they are still in love.
In principle the idea of the story is lovely but..........OMG!! The
writing doesn't flow, the sentences are short and stilted and the whole
thing has a very immature feel to it. This is clearly a self published
piece of work and more and more I'm beginning to feel short changed as a
reader that work of this low standard is available on a trusted site
such as Amazon.
I love my Kindle I can fit hundreds of books on
it and carry them with me easily wherever I go. Why is it that with the
invention of E-Books we now have to be subjected to illiterate people
selling us their work?