Thursday, 28 June 2012

Blood of the Revenant by N.R.Allen - Review by Jane


2.5 Stars

Gabriel the ‘fighter’ of the family wanted to be an artist but for the life of him he couldn’t draw. Sitting by the pond one day with Baital, he began to sketch the scenery in front of him. He drew the picture over and over trying to get it right but for some reason he couldn’t. Each time he began, he would draw a tree; but there was no tree before him, under the tree was a girl covered in blood, though she wasn’t really there either. Everything was wrong this day but Gabriel didn’t understand why. On his way back home he was attacked by Ryvall; one of the ‘older’ females who despised him, but after he managed to get away Gabriel soon learnt exactly what was wrong with the day. Ryvall was in cahoots with Exile; a rogue revenant who had been imprisoned for years but was trying again to take over the city, and even the priests seemed to be allowing it to happen. Together with Lamia; a lone revenant, Gabriel and his family set out to save the city before anymore revenants or his family are murdered, but can he really trust her?

I was given a copy of this book for review and as is normal for me with review books even if I am provided with a blurb, I never read it… So the only information I had about this story was the title, and that gave nothing at all away as far as the plot was concerned. The minute I began to read my curiosity was piqued! I found the story intriguing, it was so completely different to anything else I have read before, and I read…A LOT!….But….it wasn’t long before I was totally confused! The story was very slow, it plodded along, giving us plenty of  things to build interest but not quite enough to give us understanding….I was getting quite far into the story and I still didn’t know what a revenant was. This lack of information and explanation soon turned my curiosity to annoyance. I couldn’t connect with the characters because I didn’t even understand what they were plus the names were so unusual often not giving clue to gender or pronunciation that it became quite a chore to read.

I really really really wanted this book to blow me away, it started off so well and I still definitely give it 10 out of 10 for uniqueness I am just disappointed that the plot wasn’t executed better. I’m disappointed that the author tended to forget that although she knows all the facts the reader doesn’t so we needed a little more in way of explanation. I certainly wouldn’t write this book off but I think it does need reworking a little bit, perhaps take out a few of the repetitive sentences and include a few more facts to speed up the pace, if that was done I think it could be a really great read.

Copy supplied for review

Wednesday, 27 June 2012

The Road to Dark Desire by Brooklynn Rivers - Review by Jane

4 Stars


Skyler Weston and her friend Josie accidentally happen across an injured man on the road, they carry him to a nearby cabin in the forest where Skyler nurses him back to health. Skyler knew that he was some kind of highway man because of the way he was dressed but she didn’t realise he was the infamous Ellesbrooke bandit.

Quentin had been forced into this life of treachery after he and his brother Douglas were conned out of their home and inheritance. Together they were determined to get it back but it wasn’t an easy task with a bounty on his head and half the county out to kill him.

Innocent maidens, ruggedly handsome men on horse back, lust, danger and hero’s OMG can the scene set be anymore romantic? I loved this book! I was totally drawn in and could not stop reading, finishing the whole thing in one day (With a totally ignored and grumpy family as a result!!) The Road to Dark Desire is full of action and adventure it’s fast moving and there is constantly something happening to keep the reader turning the pages.

Brooklynn Rivers easy writing style drew me in and I was quickly lost in the plot, living alongside the characters feeling their mood and enjoying the ride. I loved the fact that when Skyler was in danger  Quentin would do anything, even risk his life to save her, and I especially liked that Skyler wasn’t some wimpy woman and was tough enough to do the same for him. The pair were a perfect match and the chemistry jumped off the pages. I would highly recommend this book to all fans of Historical Romance, you won’t be disappointed!

Copy supplied for review.



Monday, 25 June 2012

Golden by Monika Pardon - Review by Jane


3 Stars

When Sonora’s Grandmother died her Aunt Liz and cousin Ramona moved into the house to take care of her. Liz was not happy because her mother had left the house and money to Sonora so she had no choice but to take care of the girl until she turned 21. During a summer trip to a cabin in the woods Sonora and her cousin were injured in a bear attack and some very strange things began to happen. Sonora’s body started to heal very quickly, Liz’s true personality was  showing through and Sonora didn’t feel she could trust the people around her.

The story was a little slow to start, I was over a third of the way through the book and still didn’t know where it was going. I was beginning to think that perhaps the Goldilocks and the three bears connection was going to be the only point in the plot! Mundane things were happening and there were the odd clues to hint that something bigger was going on but nothing concrete had materialised and the story began to drag for me. By the time I got to the half way mark all had been explained (it was more than just a rehashed fairytale!) and the pace picked up so I was able to get back into the groove!

For a debut novel this is a great book, there were some interesting characters and a very unusual storyline. I enjoyed the different take on the fairytales and the inclusion of shape-shifters and other magical beings. The prose was sometimes a little mixed up and confusing as if the writer was unsure if she was telling us the story as it happened or after the fact and I did notice a few incorrect words i.e. corporation instead of co-operation and hurdled in stead of hurtled but these errors were easy to read over and understand what she had meant to say. We are left with an ending that is open for more stories in a series I will be sure to watch out for.

Copy supplied for review.









Saturday, 23 June 2012

Interview with Edward H. Carpenter



Recently I was lucky enough to interview Edward Carpenter, author of 'Happily ever after', 'Seven lives to repay our country' and 'Lethargica'. If you haven't done so already I suggest you read his very thought provoking books. Please welcome him to the page. ~Jane






Q:- Happily Ever after is a funny fairy tale, very different to the other stories I have read of yours. How easy/difficult do you find it to write humour?

E.H.C:- Great question. Believe it or not, I actually do have a sense of humor, and it ranges from sarcastic to a bit dry. Very much influenced by the cast of Monty Python, I’m afraid. I enjoy writing with a humorous angle, and I have a couple of works in progress that allow me to explore this.

Q:- Random Question:- (I’m asking 10 authors this question to see how many say yes) If I asked you to include the phrase ‘A day without sunshine is like, you know, night.’ Somewhere in your next book, would you?

E.H.C:- Oh, I do love a good challenge. I’m pretty sure that I can fit it in somewhere in one of my soon-to-be-released stories. So, as my friend Yohana would say, “Challenge accepted!”
Jane:- I will be looking out for it :)

Q:- Seven lives and Lethargica both contain a war element in the story. Why is this subject so close to your heart?

E.H.C:- Well, I’ve been in the military since I was seventeen. Started out very idealistic, and have come to see war and the military profession for much more of what it really is, but I can still remember when I saw it through a much more romantic and nationalistic lens. I haven’t deliberately set out to write war stories, but I guess that it is true, to an extent at least, that we write what we know.

Q:- So far I have only seen short stories written by you. Do you think you will ever write a full length novel?

E.H.C:- Oh, I hope to write a few! My first full-length novel is in progress; a look at the darker side of the Regency through the eyes of the perfidious Mister Wickham, and I am considering releasing it as a serial on the Internet, one chapter a week for approximately 6 months before issuing the complete novel in hard-copy and e-book formats. I’d be very interested to hear your thoughts and those of your readers. The serial novel was quite the thing back in Dickens’ day – is it a good fit for the modern reader? Beyond that, I have a great idea for another novel, but it’ll be a while before that one comes out.

Q:- Your work always feels realistic and true to life (with the exception of ‘Happily ever after’!) How much time do you spend researching for your books?

E.H.C:- Actually, a good bit of my time is spent doing research, which is one of the interesting part of writing historical fiction – learning things you didn’t know as you pursue the idea for a story. A great example is my current project, which arose spontaneously from something I saw in Hanoi on a recent trip to Vietnam – to tell a story about a plane, a missile, a bullet, and a handful of people whose lives are touched in various ways by those objects, I’ve had to do extensive research into the B-52D strategic bomber and the SA-2 missile, and learned all kinds of interesting, little-known facts to make the story come alive. I will generally write the majority of a story fairly quickly, over a few days, and as I write, I’ll put xxx’s for things I don’t know. Then I’ll start my historical research, filling in the blanks. If I learn something new, I may have to rewrite and take the story in a slightly different direction. Research is easily 50 percent of the time in writing a story. Then, for me, as an independent author, there’s editing, cover art, making book trailers, and promotion. The last has proven to be the most time consuming and least fun – though I have to say, this interview has been very pleasant!

Quick Fire Questions:-

a)      Football or Baseball?Neither! I’m a rugby player and fan!
b)     Action film or Horror film?Action!
c)      E-mail or Letter? Either? I love old-fashioned letters, but hardly ever get them (or write them) these days.
d)     Car or Motorcycle?Motorcycle. Black 2006 Ninja 636...
e)    I-pod or vinyl? - Neither. Can’t stand the I-Franchise, and haven’t owned a record        player in years. Sansa MP3 player.

Q:- Publishing is not an easy business. What have your experiences been since entering this cut throat world?

E.H.C:- So far, my experiences have been good, overall. There doesn’t seem to be a great “how-to” guide, so I’m writing one as I go along and trying to share what I learn through my blog in the meantime. I think that this is a great time to be a writer, but I think that everyone would do well to recognize Amazon, for example, as what it is – a temporary phenomenon. I think we as a community need to realize that it’s quite possible that the royalty-based payment system that has been the standard for the 19th and 20th century didn’t exist before that, and people still wrote and published, but usually with the patronage of the aristocracy. Intellectual property is going to become harder and harder to protect – at some point, we may want to look at a way that an author can make a living wage by writing good material, but get paid through some other vehicle than royalties, and that our stories will then be released free over the internet. I’m testing the concept in the months to come with a Kickstarter project. I’ll keep you posted!

Q:- Moral Dilemma:- You are leading 100 people in a survivalist situation, when suddenly your lives are in danger and you must choose between two courses of action. One would cause 10 of the people to die and everyone else would live, the other would have a 70% chance of saving everyone but were it to fail then everyone would die. Which would you choose and why?

E.H.C:- Sorry, I am like James T. Kirk – not in that I seduce a different beautiful alien girl every week (I wish!) but in that I don’t believe in the Kobayashi Maru (a no-win situation) - good question though, and funny you should ask, since as a military officer, it’s incumbent in my profession to send men into situations knowing that statistically speaking, a certain percentage will never return.

Q:- What plans do you have in the pipeline?

E.H.C:- Oh, so much. If you liked Happily Ever After, you’re probably going to enjoy Charming. Yup, everyone’s favorite supporting male character is about to get his own story. If you want a free short-short story, check out Emily Dickinson in Hanoi on my blog. The Perfidious Mister Wickham is coming, one way or another, and there’ll be a short story in that storyline, A Matter of Honor. Then we have some Yugoslav artillerymen, George Washington in a slightly skewed version of Revolutionary America, a Welsh mouse on an Indonesian island, a story of life and death in Vietnam, and a bit of good-natured meddling by Merlin to subtly alter the course of British history. And that’s just the fiction. I need to finish the reverse translation and editing of a book I wrote on in Indonesian on naval strategy, finish a language learning book for Indonesian, and finish my how-to guide to publishing short stories as e-books. So, it’s going to be a busy year.

Q:-   ‘Seven lives’ is about  nameless Japanese soldiers facing their death in WWII. What made you decide to write from their perspective rather than from the view of American soldiers?

E.H.C:- Well, I was living in Japan at the time, studying the language, and doing some professional reading about the Pacific War. Obviously I’m a U.S. Marine, so we were on the other side of that battle. But I was touched by the hopeless nature of the situation, and drawn to the parallels to a Japanese anime series I was watching at the time – Neon Genesis Evangelion. It’s a familiar story – boy meets robot, boy plus robot save the world, get the girl, except... Nope. It doesn’t end that way. It ends up being a story about what you do when there’s no way out. So, in fact, Seven Lives... became a bit of a homage – all the character names in my story are taken from Evangelion, and a couple of the recurrent phrases. The structure of the language, the way Shinji and Kawaru talk – well, that’s closer to an English transliteration of Japanese than to proper English – much as if it was the sub-titling in an anime film. Finally, using General Saito’s speech to section the fictional material – it just seemed right. I really couldn’t have written the same story from a U.S. perspective.


Q:- What has writing made you learn about yourself?

E.H.C:- Another great question – hadn’t actually given that much thought. I might have to take a pass on this one – for me, I’m afraid writing has not been a journey of self-discovery, at least to date. Stories just occur to me, and I tell them.


Q:- Have you read anything recently and thought ‘Damn why didn’t I think of that’?

E.H.C:- Fifty Shades of Grey? “Why didn’t I think of re-writing fan-fiction as a pseudo-BDSM novel where the Dominant protagonist basically throws his entire sexual identity away to be with a woman who, like most virgins, is multi-orgasmic, lacks a gag reflex, and although she fits perfectly into all her hot roommate’s clothes, somehow has esteem issues?” Ha-ha. Nope. Although I definitely do get inspired by other authors. Lately, I’d say Neil Gaiman, Cory Doctorow, and Neal Stephenson top the list. But really, there are too many to list. Sort of channeling a combination of Jane Austen and George McDonald Fraser at the moment.
Jane:- You’ve read Fifty?? *sighs*!


Q:- How did you decide on your books Titles?

E.H.C:- Seven Lives to Repay Our Country and Lethargica basically wrote their own titles – the first comes from an excerpt of General Saito’s final speech to his troops, and the second, well, the word reminded me of Ars Poetica... It was the only possible title. Happily Ever After, I maybe should have thought harder about, and looked at how many other (lesser) works already had a similar title. But c’est la vie! Most of my titles are that way – I often have the title in my mind before I write the story. Not always, though!

Q:- What is the most embarrassing moment of your life?

E.H.C:- Ha, not sure. I don’t really get embarrassed too easily.
Jane:- I wish I didn’t, I get embarrassed walking into a room!! 


Where to find Edward and his work:-
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Wednesday, 20 June 2012

Celtic Rose by Jill Campbell – Review by Lindsay

4 Stars

This book is pretty darn good but not really unique. There are a lot of characters, each with their own distinct personalities, so there is something for everyone.
Kallisto who is an Irish princess, and Talus, a Scottish prince, fall in love and want to be together. However their families are at war and our princess is sadly betrothed to another.

They get to be together but on their wedding day they are murdered. On top of that, a curse is placed on them and everyone who died to avenge them. An enchantress tries to help them, but the only help she could give is for them to live their lives over and over throughout the years.... I’m not saying any more because it will give too much of the storyline away.

The reborn, living again, finding each other, dying again has all been done before, many many times and so this story is not unique in that respect. However it’s still a good read, and rather a quick one.

The only gripes I had was that we were told things more than we were shown them. There were rather a few run on sentences and at points, the story jumped around quite a little. The character names were also really over used. Other than that, the storyline was good enough to keep me turning the pages and wanting more at the end.

I believe this is going to be a series, and I will reading the next chapter.

The Slayer and the Sphinx by Adam Bolander - Review by Jane


4 Stars

Too young to travel with her parents Sarah is left at home with the maid Mrs Rasta. During the evening they hear a loud noise, rushing to see where it came from they find themselves under attack by the slayers. Sarah unable to fight well, watches as the slayers kill Mrs Rasta and in an attempt to save herself she teleports to safety accidentally taking Porter; one of the slayers, with her. The pair are lost and confused but soon learn if they are to survive they are going to have to go against all they have ever known and help each other.

The Slayer and the Sphinx is a mostly well written, imaginative read. Written from various POV’s it is sometimes a little repetitive as we get to see the same situation from different people. The protagonists are well developed and likable, even Porter with his many past misdemeanours manages to win over the hearts of the readers with his new direction. Clearly from how the book ends this is the beginning of a series and I think this instalment is a good introduction, taking us  into the world of ‘Mythics’ with  a balanced mixture of  good and evil beings to keep the story moving along at a reasonable pace.

I’m not sure of the age range this book is aimed at, there is action and violence, but not too much so I’m thinking YA or younger, I certainly wouldn’t have any problem with my 11 year old reading this and to be honest I think she would really enjoy it.

Copy supplied for review.



Monday, 18 June 2012

The Chosen One by Gladys Quintal - Review by Jane


4 Stars

The Chosen One is a fast paced drama with non stop action and suspense throughout, it’s full of unexpected twists and turns that kept me turning the pages until I finished the whole book in one sitting.  Alexi is still struggling to keep his own secret and now has the added stress of  keeping A.J hidden as his sons abilities are beginning to show. Luckily he has his family and friends to support him, but the question is, will they be able to find the threat in time? The ending was abrupt and I found myself trying to turn the page for the next chapter, so with my hate of waiting I did feel a little aarrrggghhh at the fact I have to wait a while to find out ‘What the hell has been going on?’!!!!

This is the 3rd instalment of the Dream series and I can honestly say I am honoured to have read them all. I have watched this authors progress and seen her grow into a great story teller. From the first edition of  ‘The Man of my Dreams’ which had potential but needed a lot of work, to ‘Be Careful What You Wish For’ which was so much more polished. I can see the difference and improvements in the authors writing style as she has gained experience. Gladys Quintal has definitely found her niche and I am looking forward to the rest of the series with interest.

Thank you for sending me this ARC copy for review.

Sunday, 17 June 2012

The Guest by Karen Dales - Review by Jane


4 Stars

This is a short story; around a half hour to read, about Monks and their belief in reincarnation. ‘The Guest’ stands alone but I understand contains a character from Dales ’Chosen Chronicles’ series. The content is very cryptic keeping us wondering and guessing about who the guest really is until we manage to collect enough clues to ‘maybe’ work it out.

I found the story very emotional and touching and as a taster it has left me wanting to read more of this authors work and find out for sure just who this character is. I will definitely be doing just that in the very near future.

Loving the rain by Jeff LaFerney - Review by Jane


3 Stars

Clay has lived his life keeping his power of mind control secret, not telling anyone, not even his wife about his ability. He generally refused to use his influence to benefit his life, preferring to earn his achievements the natural way, but the odd slip along the way has long term consequences that he is forced to deal with now. After spending years feeling isolated thinking he is the only one, he discovers his son Tanner has inherited the ‘gift’ too and finally he has someone to talk to about it, and a partner to help fix passed wrongs.

Loving the rain is a quick read, it started out slow and didn’t pull me in right away. I found the sport terminology a little confusing as it is an American game, one I have absolutely no understanding of but that is a personal issue and something I didn’t take into account when working out my final rating value. I was expecting more in terms of the paranormal side, a little more action or drama around it, but this wasn’t the case. The book concentrated on the effects of the power more than them using the power.

As the pace picked up Jeff did a good job of building the tension but I still felt it lacked ‘umph’ in some of the scenes and the characters reactions didn’t feel real in certain situations. It will be interesting to see where this story is going to go next and I will read book 2 in the series ‘The Skeleton Key’.

Friday, 15 June 2012

Interview with Alisa Jeruconoka



Today I would like to introduce Alisa Jeruconoka. Alisa is the author of 'Unparallel Worlds' a Fantasy Fiction novel based on a multi-dimensional planet called Adriana.


Thank-you for taking the time to speak with me.


Jane
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Q:- Do you write full time or do you also have a day job?

A.J I had a career as an international business translator, however when I was expecting my daughter I decided not to take maternity but a career break. It was during this time that I decided to write again so wrote ‘’Unparallel Worlds’’. At college and university I found time to write stage plays for the drama group to perform in between my studies. However my busy career prevented me from doing this for several years. So in short I’m now a full time writer.

Quick Fire Questions:-

a) What colour shoes are you wearing? I’m wearing maroon as we speak, but this as a whole is a very difficult question, as with most women I have loads of shoes in different colours and what I wear depends on the occasion. Today I am accompanying my husband to a business meeting and my cocktail dress is red so the maroon shoes I have really work.

b) Favourite smell? Fresh ground coffee, freshly baked bread, roses and fresh air. Sorry for the multiple answer but I can’t choose a favourite from them.

c) Do you still have your tonsils? Yes I do – I never suffered tonsillitis so there was never a reason to remove them.

d)  Eye Colour? Greenish blue with a hint of grey.

e)     What did you have for breakfast this morning? Wholegrain toast with a light chocolate and hazel nut spread – very filling but also healthy…I think?

Q:-      You wrote both Sci-Fi and Fantasy into your book, What made you decide to mix the two genres?

A.J I wanted to write something different from the genre that is dominating the YA market these days (Urban Fantasies involving werewolves and vampires) I decided to write a book that would mix two genres and the only two I thought would work together well were Science Fiction and Fantasy Fiction. I love the story but it really depends on whether readers feel I pulled it off.

 Q:-When you were a child your Mum used to help you create imaginary worlds to write about, are any of the characters in ‘Unparallel Worlds’ characters you had created together when you were young?

A.J No. But I’m going to bring some of them back in the second book.

Q:-Moral Dilemma :- You’re in a hotel and accidentally knock over a very expensive vase, as it smashes on the floor the bell boy walks by and the manager instantly blames him…. Do you let the worker take the blame or own up to what you have done?

 A.J  As much as I would like to blame the bell boy, I think in a real situation I would own up to it – I would be conscious of what the bell boy would think of me if I blamed him and he lost his job – if I was in his shoes I would respect the honestly of a person like me.

Q:-  As a reader, character names are extremely important to me. How much thought did you put into the names in your book and as some are very unusual did you make them up?

A.J   I agree with you whole heartedly here, the character names were very important so I tried to choose names that not only reflected their character/personalities but also the part they would play in the story. I did spend a lot of time choosing their names and used a mix of Greek mythology and my imagination – so some names are made up.

Q:- Can you describe your book in five words? 

A.J  Epic, Adventurous, Imaginative, Fun and Moving.

Q:-When will book two be ready for publication and have you decided the title for it yet?

A.J  Backed by popular demand I’ve start writing the second book I think it will take about another year and I haven’t decided on the title yet.

Q:- Working as an international business translator/interpreter must have been very interesting. What languages do you speak and which is your favourite?

A.J English, French and Russian.

Q:-Can you tell me something about yourself that is not publicly known? 

A.J I’m a great ice skater and swimmer, so I love scuba diving. 

Q:-How many books do you have planned for the series?

A.J My sequel will have three books.

Q:-  Is your series complete in your head or is it yet to develop?

A.J  I have an idea but not complete, I want to listen to the feedback of my readers so that I can take some inspiration from them.


Where to find Alisa and her books:-

Tuesday, 12 June 2012

Deadly Reckoning by Elle James - Review by Jane


3 Stars

This was a typical romance novel with the angst and the reluctance in the beginning and the HEA at the end. It was an intrigue so we had him as the sheriff and her as the artist whose life was under threat from a psycho stalker killer. I do like the knight in shining armour, the man who protects his woman and all that but boy did she frustrate me. I never quite understand why these women have to be written so ‘dumb’.

There’s a killer in town, he’s followed you here and you’re staying in a cottage on a cliff just out side of town. It’s isolated and the weather is shitty, fog rolling in from the sea making it impossible to see more than 12” in front of your face. The sheriff moves you into a local B&B where you’ll be in town and safe while he goes off to get info on a suspect………….So what do you do? Well if you’re normal you will stay put., be pleased that the people around you will prevent the killer from trying to strangle you for the 4th time, and this time probably succeed……Not if you’re this character, you will have the sudden urge to go back to the cottage and paint a picture……you will not be able to wait until tomoz and of course you’ll be on your own …… aarrggghhh. It just really infuriates me because it wouldn’t happen, most women are just not that stupid.

Anyway I’m sure you can guess the outcome without either reading it or me telling you and it is an ok read if you don’t mind really really annoying lead female characters!

Friday, 8 June 2012

Interview with Merry Farmer

Please welcome Merry Farmer to the page. Merry is the author of 'The Loyal Heart', 'The Faithful Heart' and newly released 'Our Little Secrets' I was honoured to be able to interview her. Thank- you.

Jane
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Q:-   You’re books are set in medieval England. What do you find interesting about that time, and have you ever visited England?

M.F I grew up just down the hill from Glencairn Museum in Bryn Athyn, PA, which I believe houses the largest private collection of medieval artwork in the US.  Since we went there on school trips a lot and some of my family worked there I was around medieval art and artifacts all the time from an early age.  To me the period was always very real and familiar.  Then, when I was just out of high school, I spent two years as an actor at the Pennsylvania Renaissance Faire, running around pretending to be an Elizabethan peasant all weekend through the summer.  We had extensive lessons in Elizabethan language, customs, and manners, so again history was made very real for me.

I traveled to England in 2010 with my cricket team, to Winchester and Oxford.  And WOW!  It felt like going home.  Winchester was the capital of England long before London (and was also Jane Austen’s home for the later part of her life.  She’s buried in Winchester Cathedral.  I visited her and paid my respects).  Oxford has been a university town since the early 11th century and you can absolutely feel it in every stone and tree, in the air and the gardens.  There were side streets within Oxford University that I swear haven’t changed a bit in a thousand years.

Q:-  Is it wrong that while reading ‘The Loyal Heart’ I fell in love with Crispin not Ethan?

M.F  That all depends on which part of the book you were reading when you started falling in love with him!  *wiggles eyebrows*

Q:- Is there anything in any of your books that would embarrass you if your dad read them?

M.F Well, sort of.  I tend to write rather steamy sex scenes, which is the obvious answer.  But seeing as I don’t have the best relationship with my dad, I would potentially be more embarrassed if he knew that the character of Matlock was based on him.  (He’s a much bigger character in The Faithful Heart and The Courageous Heart than he is in The Loyal Heart.)

Quick Fire Questions:-

a)  What time did you get up this morning?  6:20am

b)  Can you roll/curl your tongue?  Oh yeah! (just did it)

c)  Favourite food?  Salmon from Outback Steakhouse (preceded by a bloomin’ onion)

d)  What is by your side right now?  My Kindle … which is sort of an obvious, lame answer for a writer. (Jane~ Mine is beside me too!!)

e)  Eye colour?  Deep brown

Q:- Did you have the whole of ‘The Noble Hearts’ series planned when you started writing it or is it evolving as you write?

M.F Funny you should ask that….  I thought I had the whole Noble Hearts series planned when I started writing it.  The Loyal Heart stayed pretty much on track.  But I wrote the first draft of that and The Faithful Heart in 2008 and then set the whole thing aside for a while.  Then last summer, after attending a writer’s conference and learning about how exciting indie publishing was (and still is) I decided to revise and publish The Noble Hearts independently.  When I reread The Faithful Heart after so many years, well, it sucked.  Like, a lot.  So I dissected the original version, threw out about 80% of it, and rewrote it from the ground up.  And that profoundly changed the direction of the entire series.  Based on the changes I made in revisions of The Faithful Heart, 99% of the ideas I had for the plot of The Courageous Heart changed.  The two things I kept from my original concept of The Courageous Heart is that it takes place in London when the Derbyshire folk are summoned to court by King Richard, freshly returned from his captivity, and that it ends with a scene on the gallows that will have you in tears.

Q:-  What was the most interesting fact you found out whilst researching for your books?

M.F As a history major I knew a lot of the history of the time period to begin with.  What I hadn’t known was that King Richard only spent six months total of his reign in England, three of them in the Spring of 1194 when The Courageous Heart takes place, and that he didn’t speak English.  Of course, learning that King Richard didn’t speak English made for some really interesting plot twist ideas for a certain Earl and his bailiff who have to defend their actions through shifty translators.  *more eyebrow wiggling*

Q:-   E-books have become so popular over the last few years, do you think they will replace paper books altogether?

M.F Not altogether, but I do think they will become what mass market paperback books are now.  I believe the majority of genre fiction will be in eBook form, print will be saved for literary fiction and non-fiction, and publishing companies will have to pursue indie authors for the rights to print their books rather than authors querying agents and publishers to have their books published.  And what a wonderful world that will be!

Q:-  What is your work schedule like when you’re writing?

M.F When I’m writing a first draft I try to write 2,500 words a day.  That was a lot easier before some changes were made at my day job.  At the moment I can only write after work and on weekends.  I try to get in at least two hours per weeknight and five hours per day on the weekends.  When I’m revising I try to spend the same amount of time, but it varies a lot more.  I prefer drafting to revising.  It’s so much more fun!

Q:-  Do you hear from your readers much? What kind of things do they say?

M.F I hear from people through my website, through Facebook, and various messageboards, like Goodreads and Kindle Boards.  Readers are very astute these days.  They like to be in on the process at a much earlier stage than I think they used to be.  Your average savvy reader knows much more about how books are published these days than they ever have.

Q:- When will ‘The Courageous Heart’ be available for download?

M.F Um…  As soon as I finish writing it?  I’m aiming for October/November, depending on what my editor things about it.

Q:- What other works do you have on the go and are they also romance based?

M.F Oh my gosh, I have so many ideas and outlines and random characters begging for a story that I could write full-time for the rest of my life and still not get everything finished.  I’ve just published the first book, Our Little Secrets, in a four-book Western Historical Romance series, the last of which is my first stab at a m/m romance.  I have a couple other books that take place in the same world as The Noble Hearts but are not part of the trilogy (and which people will be very angry at me for).  I also have another four-book series that takes place in London in the Victorian age in which the first scene of each of the books takes place at the same ball but follows different characters.  Not to mention the sci-fi series I’ve already written the first two books for (but am holding back on for now) and a handful of shameful erotica novels that I will publish under a pen name.  Talk about books I would be embarrassed if my dad read!

That’s not counting any new ideas that float into my head on an almost daily basis.

Q:-  If I gave you the plot outline to my perfect read would you write it for me?

M.F If I could, I would.  But as a writer I have to write what my soul wants to write.  So unless your perfect read matched what my soul wanted to write, I could try but it might not happen.

Q:- I’m a chocoholic…..(and I smoke eek yuk! *hangs head*) What is your guilty pleasure?

M.F Bollywood.  I love Bollywood films.  That and cookies.  Cookies are wonderful!  Especially when they’re homemade.

Q:- What made you stop writing  ‘The Courageous Heart’ and finish ‘Our Little Secrets’ instead?

M.F I’m glad you asked, because that story is something I think a lot of other writers need to hear.

I had actually written the first draft of Our Little Secrets last August during a slow spell at work.  It was based on a concept I’d flirted with for years: a woman stepping off the train in the west in search of a new life, meeting a man, and agreeing to marry him within 45 minutes, no questions asked.  And then discovering that not only are they really good in bed together, they are soul-mates. 

But I digress….

I started writing The Courageous Heart in January, right after publishing The Faithful Heart.  I did my research, plotted as much as I plot, and started writing.  I got 16,000 words into it when I realized that I just wasn’t ready to tell that story yet.  It was the oddest feeling.  I would sit down to write and everything else under the sun would seem more interesting and deserving of my attention.  And I kept picturing Joanna being furious at me for not being able to hear what she wanted me to know about her.  So I stopped writing.  I wasn’t ready.
Meanwhile, my editor had said something to me about wanting me to submit a story for traditional publication.  So I dusted off Our Little Secrets, had her edit it, and worked on revision after revision after revision until I got it right.  I had a family tragedy in the middle of the process though, so everything was delayed.  Now I’ve finally self-published it, but I also plan to test the waters of submitting to publishers as a “previously published” book.

And somewhere in the middle of that process, The Courageous Heart clicked.  Now I can’t wait to have the time to get back to writing it again.  And as a writer you want to want to write the book you’re writing.  It was a valuable lesson for me to learn and I think it will make for a much better book in the end.

Q:- What question do you wish I had asked you in this interview but didn’t?

M.F Who’s the hottest guy in the world?  Richard Armitage. ;)


Where to find Merry and her books 
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The Faithful Heart

Thursday, 7 June 2012

Warped Mirrors by S.P Mount - Review by Jane


3 Stars

Young Julian is convinced he is better than the poor lifestyle his mum can give him, so with the intention of tasting his dream he befriends the headmasters son. Accompanying the family on a trip to a Scottish estate in the country Julian gets more than he bargained for when he meets his host ‘Julian’ and soon begins to realise the similarities between them are more than just their name.

In parts I became a little confused, there were alternate dimensions and time travel and for some reason I’ve always found it difficult to get my head around these concepts. The way changing something in the past can have a devastating result on the future…. it’s just too ‘big’ for me to comprehend! The inclusion of a mysterious Mayan globe said to have originated from an alternate universe and a strange board game that put me in mind of the 1995 film ‘Jumanji’ made for a very complex plot with a lot of possible variables.

There was one thing that got on my nerves….We were constantly being reminded of young Julian’s growing lust for ‘old’ Julian’s girlfriend, with a steady stream of instances where his desire was visible and the - not so lady like - ladies repeatedly made comments about his obvious discomfort. I didn’t find his embarrassment amusing though I think that was the intention, perhaps it’s  man humour, I just didn’t see the funny side and got a bit fed up of hearing about the young lads lack of control over certain body parts.

Warped mirrors (apt title) is not an overly long read, it flows well and has natural sounding dialogue with bits in a Scottish accent (which was fun to listen to on my kindle!!) It was slow to start but the pace picked up nicely as I got into the story. This is definitely a read YA paranormal and fantasy lovers would enjoy.

Copy supplied as an author taster! Thank-you

The Faithful Heart by Merry Farmer - Review by Jane


4 Stars

The Faithful Heart carries on from where ‘The Loyal Heart’ left off but this time we follow Jack and Madeline’s story. Madeline escapes the convent and finds her way back to Jack only to find the evil Lydia has her eyes on him too! Jack; now in his new position as lord of the manor, is struggling to win over the Noble men’s acceptance, but no matter what he does they still see him as the peasant he was. Ethan and his band of men are causing problems in the forest and after the King is captured it is left to Derbyshire to raise the ransom for his release.

Merry Farmers knowledge of medieval England is palpable, her descriptions are authentic and so visual it is easy to be pulled into that time. The language, the behaviour and the culture are spot on for the day and Merrys love of  the era is obvious.

Like the first in the series this book drew me in from the start, the plot is quite complicated and we are introduced to some new, as well as the already known characters, which at times I struggled to keep check of. There is plenty of action and the story moves along quite quickly keeping the reader engaged throughout. The novel is well written and there are no obvious editing issues.

My only gripe is I don’t know how long we have to wait for the release of  ‘The courageous Heart’ the concluding book of the series!

Catch my interview with Merry farmer on Friday 8th June



Sunday, 3 June 2012

The Second Thought: Review - "Bloodlines" by Lindsay Anne Kendal

The Second Thought: Review - "Bloodlines" by Lindsay Anne Kendal: "Bloodlines" by Lindsay Anne Kendal is a YA, fiction/paranormal novel that is centered around the concepts of witchcraft and demons. It i...

Please stop by and say Hi to Author Ben Hennessy.

Please give a warm welcome to Ben Hennessy. He's come to visit us today to tell us a little about himself and his upcoming release Queen of The World. 

Blurb

In the legends, the Four saved the world from war and poverty. These incredible men walked the lands, seeking an audience with the ruler of each nation. They demanded that humanity focus its efforts on education, trade and culture. No longer would the people face starvation and terror. This commandment was enforced with displays of miraculous power. After all, it is difficult to argue with the Gods. Once finished, the Four left with a promise: If ever your people fall back into darkness, then we shall return.

Now, over five centuries later, Sarene grows tired of her village life. Suffocated by the confines of her surroundings and the overbearing protection of her family, she yearns to have an adventure of her own.

But the world outside is not as tranquil as it seems.

And Sarene is already in danger.


Q: Can you tell us a little about yourself?

A: Well, my name’s Ben Hennessy, as is probably hinted at in the title of this post. I’m an author of fantasy fiction. My debut novel, Queen of the World, will be released by July 2012. I’m born and raised in Essex, England, and I’m rapidly approaching the end of my twenties. Writing, whether I’m doing it myself or reading the work of others, is something I’ve always enjoyed doing. The ability for anyone to take a standard archetype such as fantasy, horror or romance and add their own unique spin has always fascinated me. After several years of toying with the idea of writing my own novel, I finally knuckled down to it in 2010. Now, eighteen months later, here we are.

Q: Other than writing, what else are you passionate about?

A: Music and travelling. I wrote Queen of the World while indulging the latter; the first sentence of the manuscript was put to page in Hanoi, Vietnam. The words kept coming over the next several months, and the first draft was completed in Porsgrunn, Norway. So the novel’s already quite well travelled. -grins- I’ve been to four continents so far, and hopefully North America is next on my list.

As for music, I used to play in an angry metal band and I DJ occasionally for alternative venues. Anything heavy metal, rock ‘n’ roll or punk keeps me happy, with some other more eclectic tastes thrown in. Patrick Wolf, anyone?

Q: Why made you decide to become a writer?

A: Money. Clearly writers earn millions of pounds every time they write a book. Having films made of my work.  Or a AMC television series, something like that. (Some or all of this may be a lie.)

In reality though, I just like telling stories. It’s the same as why artists paint or photographers travel miles with a camera. The sense of fulfillment from describing a story and, hopefully, having others take pleasure from it is something you rarely find elsewhere. I’ve always enjoyed reading, which is a passion I shared with my Dad – he introduced me to a lot of my favourite authors, such as David Eddings, Stephen King and Terry Pratchett. Novels such as Legend and The Belgariad series inspired me to give it a try.

Q: What brought you to this genre?

A: It’s a tricky one. I wrote a blog post answering this – which can be found at http://hennessywrites.com/home/?p=56 – where I basically explain that I admire heroes. People who stand by a code of honour and face huge dangers with nothing more than a sword in hand and bucket loads of courage. Fantasy has always been the strongest genre for that kind of character, and it’s what always attracted me as a reader. Also, fantasy allows you free reign to create anything you like. There’s none of the enforced realism of a contemporary story, and while it’s probably best for an author to not go overboard with the dragons, elves and place-names such as Kinnjillianani’quaa, that potential to explore one’s imagination is bags of fun.

Q: Do you ever suffer from writer’s block? If so, what do you do about it?

A: I don’t really suffer from it, or at least I haven’t yet. I am a terrible procrastinator, though. There’s so much YouTube to watch or comics to read when I should be working. But as far as having ideas or scenes to play around with, I don’t think I’ve ever had a problem with writing once I sit down to work.

Front Cover in the Making.
Q: Can you tell us a bit about your book?

A: Would be happy to. Queen of the World is based in a world where the Four, men of incredible power, have enforced a commandment upon the rulers of each nation to eradicate war and poverty. They made sure these rulers complied by killing any who disobeyed. Once their vision of humanity had been maintained, the Four left mankind to govern itself – with the warning that should standards slip, then they would return.

Within this world, in the kingdom of Tamir, lives a young girl named Sarene. She’s tired of her rural home life and wants to see more of the world. Her eldest brother, Jared, has become a scout for the national guard and she’s jealous of his opportunities for travel and adventure. As she’s contemplating running away from home in search of him, an unexpected chain of events prematurely force Sarene out into a world which isn’t quite as idyllic as she has been led to believe.

Q: Describe your novel in five words.

A: Difficult to describe so briefly.

Q: Who is your favourite character and why?

A: I think Kanderil, a huge woodsman who Sarene meets early in the story. He’s an old-school fantasy character, with a deep sense of honour and a very disciplined view of the world. I like that he has become so self-sufficient and capable as a hunter, but has forgotten how to be social or empathic towards others and quite often does or says things which can be seen as heartless. He became a hermit several years before the story starts and is happy to spend his life alone, but he finds himself caught up in Sarene’s story against his wishes.

Q: What three things do you have to have around you in order to write?

A: Coffee, cigarettes and music. Usually in that order. I’m trying to replace cigarettes with fruit, but it’s not really working for me so far.

Q: Did you learn anything from writing your book and what was it?

A: I leaned that I knew almost nothing about the publishing process, haha. I thought that, once I’d had my submission accepted by Inspired Quill, I would do a bit of editing and leave the rest of the work to people who knew better. But as it turns out I’ve worked on the manuscript just as much since the contract was signed than before submitting. Further full edits, a redraft, cover art ideas, social media interactions, promotion, blog updates... It’s been amazing fun, but I now have a much greater appreciation for any author who’s had their writing published. The amount of extra time and effort it takes to get to the finished product was a revelation

Q: What do you think readers will find most notable about this book?

A: I think that, often in fantasy, the main character is either destined to wield a great ability or already possesses said abilities. At the least, they may acquire a magical doohickey or weapon to assist them. With Queen of the World, the main character is a sweet young farmers daughter with no real knowledge of the world outside her valley home, and certainly isn’t martially proficient or supernaturally gifted. It’s her need to adapt and progress naturally to the various scenarios she faces which make her interesting, and I hope that readers will find that refreshing.

Q: What would you most like readers to tell others about this book?

A: If I was feeling ambitious, I might hope that readers would say that they enjoyed it. If people commented that it had an interesting spin on traditional heroic fantasy novels, then I’d certainly welcome that. On the base of it, though, I just hope people don’t think it sucks.

Q: How did you decide on your books Title?

A: This may come as a surprise, but Queen of the World isn’t a literal phrase. It comes from that sense within childhood that, when growing up, you’re the centre of the universe. Everything exists solely for you to experience it, and how long you retain that idea depends on your maturity. I think the title’s meaning will become clearer during the course of the story, though.

Q: How do you react to a negative review of your book?

A: Since we’re pre-release, I haven’t had one yet. But I’m actually quite looking forward to it. That might sounds a bit weird, but it’s true. Not every single person who ever reads Queen of the World is going to enjoy it, and that’s fine. I can deal with it. It’ll be interesting to see why somebody may not like the book, though. Maybe it’ll even help me with future works.

Q: You are leading 100 people in a survivalist situation, when suddenly your lives are in danger and you must choose between two courses of action. One would cause 10 of the people to die and everyone else would live, the other would have a 70% chance of saving everyone but were it to fail then everyone would die. Which would you choose and why?


A: Second option. I’m a Musketeer at heart. All for one and one for all, etc.

Q: If I asked you to include the phrase ‘A day without sunshine is like, you know, night.’ Somewhere in your next book, would you?

A: Haha. There’s one character in my book that I’ve yet to name who would be perfect for this line. If you read the novel, you’ll know who it is. I’ll keep this one in mind.

Q: What is the most embarrassing moment of your life?

A: It would probably be writing the most embarrassing moment of my life down in an interview for the Internet to see, so if I don’t answer it then I’ve saved myself. Which is like Back to the Future, but with less DeLoreans.

Q: Would you consider yourself adventurous?
 
A: Yeah. I like travelling to new places, and I’ve gotten up to enough random stuff in my life to be able to tell a few stories. I’m certainly not someone who enjoys spending a weekend indoors watching TV. I much prefer being out with people and doing things I haven’t done before.

Q: Chocolate or ice cream?

A: Ice cream. There’s only really three types of chocolate, but there’s loads of different ice creams.

Q: Do you have any advice for other writers?

A: Just write. Whatever the situation, however much else you have going on in your life, just keep putting words down. Even if it’s only a couple of sentences a night. The more you do, the better you’ll get and that manuscript will eventually reach the finishing line. There’s always a second draft if you’re unhappy with it, and even if a piece is terrible there’s usually one or two lines or phrases which can be recycled into other works. It’s all about perseverance.

Q: Where can readers find you and more about your book(s)? Where can they purchase your book(s)?

A: Currently Queen of the World isn’t available, but will be released in paperback and in various online formats by the end of July. If you’re interested then full updates will be available on my website,
http://www.hennessywrites.com, along with the book’s prologue, my personal writer’s blog and various other nuggets of information. You can catch me on Twitter as well, @HennessyWrites.

Q: What is your guilty pleasure?

A: Bryan Adams. Man, that guy can sing a rock song.

Q: Who is you’re favourite fantasy character, either from a book or a movie and why?

A: Druss, from the Drenai series by David Gemmell. He was all action, fearsome in battle and hugely anti-social. But beneath it all he was deeply loyal, faithful to his wife and inspired heroism in others despite his flaws.