This week's Freebie Friday is Ethan Rice's book Ethan's Story: My Life with Autism

Jump aboard Anchor Group Publishing's Friday Freebie. Check out Ethan Rices's book Ethan's Story: My Life with Autism. It is a fabulous, educational read for Freebie Friday. Freebie Friday's are sponsored by Anchor Group. And remember, while you're downloading, click the:

Each like, tag, or review helps the author out. Your small chance to pay it forward. Happy reading!

“I had the pleasure of reading Ethan's book, Ethan's Story: My Life With Autism (illustrated by Crystal Smalls Ord), and I was veryimpressed. ”Karen Toz  |  7 reviewers made a similar statement

“We have tried to teach them that God makes us all different and that we should try to understand those differences. ”Barbie B  |  10 reviewers made a similar statement

“This is a must read book that should be in EVERY elementary school! ”Stacey Rourke  |  7 reviewers made a similar statement A children's book written by eight year old Ethan Rice who happens to be autistic. In this fully illustrated book Ethan explains what autism means to him and why he feels so very blessed that God made him this way. Download your copy HERE!You can also visit his Facebook page HERE. His mother frequently gives Ethan updates and enjoys interacting with the families of other autistic children.

PINS by Jessica McHugh - Review by Jane

Strictly over 18’s only

4.5 Stars

Eva Finch aka Birdie, just needed a job, any job. Disappointed with endless interviews and dead end leads she finally decides to try her luck at PINS. ‘PINS’ is a bowling alley with a strip club attached and Birdie quite fancies being a dancer. Getting the job but losing her boyfriend as a result didn’t bother her, and things were going great until Diamond; one of the other girls, turned up dead in a bowling lane with a mangled face and slit throat.

Birdie is a fast learner. Having grown up feeling a little like the ugly duckling walking in her ‘beauty queen’ mothers shadow, she easily picks up the art of seduction when presented with a stage, a pole and a gaggle of men with a pocket full of five dollar bills. Though I’m sure her confidence is boosted by the weed, the lines of cocaine and  the occasional flirt with ‘catnip’!

When Jessica McHugh asked me to review her new book ‘PINS’ she told me it was a graphic horror, after reading it I think I would most likely call it a psychological thriller rather than horror…although some of the scenes are quite horrific. This is not a novel for the feint of heart. If you have any problems with graphic sexual content or extreme violence this is not the book for you. There is a continuous stream of bad language, flippant drug usage and nudity throughout the story that can’t be skipped over to focus on the murders.

‘PINS’ is a great novel, well written, well paced and absorbing. The writing is very visual and descriptive leaving no confusion as to what is happening…. I could almost smell the blood at times! I loved Birdie’s voice, her sarcasm and humour made her character real and I would highly recommend this book to anyone looking for a gritty read.

ARCopy supplied for review

Amazon.com
Amazon UK

Willow by Amy Richie -Review by Jane

4 Stars

Living with her guardian, Bella, and annoying younger sister Ivy, Willow is not happy when they have to move home…again! Starting a new school is never easy but when you constantly have to watch what you say and keep secrets about yourself, it makes finding new friends difficult and tiresome. A few overly curious boys at school pique Willows interest, but it’s only when Blake from the council shows up  that Willow learns the truth about her situation. Willow fully understands that as a female she will one day have to lead her own pack of males, but at only seventeen she thought she had more time to prepare for adulthood.

Willow is a werewolf story with a difference. It is interesting and makes a nice change to see the female in charge and leading the pack, I am so used to ‘Alpha-males’ that  I hadn’t given any thought to just how outdated ‘our’ mind set is until I saw things from this new perspective! As leader Willow is full of insecurities, she doesn’t automatically know what is right or even best for her pack, sometimes she makes mistakes but when it comes to loyalty she is behind them and they are behind her 100%. I definitely enjoyed the refreshing take on this fairly common premise.

Amy Richie is a competent writer with the ability to draw the reader in with her easy flowing prose and varied vocabulary. Though her idea has some familiar patterns it contains enough original material to make the story unique adding flare to this well used subject matter.

Copy supplied for review

Amazon.com

Amazon UK

A Cowboy for Christmas by Kristen James - Review by Jane

3 stars

After Missy’s brother dies suddenly she finds herself inheriting his half of the ranch he’d shared with his business partner, Brett. Missy is hoping that Brett will buy her out so she can start a new life somewhere else, unfortunately she soon realises that isn’t going to happen. With nothing left to keep her in the city she makes the decision to move into her brothers home and take over his duties, even with Brett’s scepticism of her ability to do so.  It doesn’t take long for the chemistry to begin to flow between the pair, but while both have secrets they want to keep from the other could a relationship really be on the cards?

A cowboy for Christmas is your typical romance novel. The plot was a little unrealistic in parts as was the romance but as the reader of ‘too many to count’ romance novels I would place this in the average pile as far as the story is concerned. Nothing about it blew me away but it was an ‘okay’ read that filled a couple of evenings entertainment.  

I found the narrative on the whole to be comfortable although some of the dialogue was a little unnatural and forced.  I would recommend this book to anyone who wants a quick and easy love story without too many surprises, or anyone who is a fan of the romance genre.

Copy supplied for review.

Amazon.com

Amazon UK

Kasadya by Karen Swart - Review by Jane

3.5 Stars

Being born from a Hellhound and a fae, Kasadya’s destiny was already written. She could live along side humans but she couldn’t interact with them, and she was to spend her life trying to redeem herself for the sins of the Hellhounds who came before her. She was not happy about her fate and was even less happy when her parents decided it was time for her to go to the ‘Hellhouse’ to learn the ‘trade’! Kasadya was in training and she had the strictest coach in the school -just her luck- but would his teachings be enough to prepare her for what was about to come?

There are a variety of characters all with different personalities who blended together make for an interesting cast. Kasadya is what I would call a typical teenager even though she isn’t human. She has the moany attitude of so many teens I have come across, this helped to make her real and believable. ‘Kasadya’ is a great story made more enjoyable by Karen Swart’s writing style which is relaxed and informal with natural sounding narrative. The plot isn’t that unique and it’s quite predictable but  still fun and entertaining to read.

Clearly the start of a series from the way the story ended, I am looking forward to the next instalment of this fantasy adventure  with the girl and her friends.

Copy Supplied for review

Amazon.com

Amazon UK

Soul Sisters by Janiera Eldridge – Review by Lindsay

4 Stars

The book was given to me by the author for an open and honest review. So here goes. 

This book is not your typical vampire novel. This brings a new and fresh look into how vampires are created. Dana and Ani, our Soul Sisters are great, three dimensional characters, they are not wimpy or needy. They are strong, kick-ass heroines and I love that in a novel. Girl Power and all that Jazz.

The whole plot is really interesting and keeps you glued to the pages. I also love just how protective the vampire sister is of her human one. These girls are in the fight of their lives, and neither have the option to lose. If one dies, the other instantly dies. 

I don’t really want to give much of the storyline away, so I’m sorry if I’m talking in riddles. The main reason for that with this book, is that it’s so unique that I really want readers to experience everything without me spoiling any single part of it for them. 

I would recommend this to anyone who has a love of vampire, who is looking for something different and fresh, and who loves strong female characters who will stop at nothing to protect themselves and each other. 

Doppelganger by Milda Harris - Review by Jane

3.5 Stars

OMG it was a major cliff-hanger NOOooo!!

Citrus and Aedan found themselves in a very unusual position when they turned up at school one morning to find themselves, or rather their doubles, already in their class. The pair soon realise that something strange is happening in their town and their class mates are being kidnapped and replaced by doppelgangers. How they avoided being taken they don’t know but the race is on to find their friends before something awful happens to them.

This book had me turning the pages from start to finish, I was so curious as to what was happening and where these doppelgangers came from. I haven’t come across a storyline quite like this one before and found the whole thing totally unpredictable. Some of the scenes did drag on and feel a little irrelevant to the story slowing the pace in parts but the ‘need to know’ kept me hooked. One major twist had me really shocked, I  did NOT see it coming!

When I was up to 90% (I read the kindle version) and we were at a fairly crucial point in the plot I was devastated to find the book ended and the last 10% was an excerpt from a totally different book…..How can you do this to me??? Book 2 is coming soon……..but when is soon?? I need to know…NOW!!!

Overall this was a very interesting read, it had humour, adventure, suspense and intrigue. It is a comfortable read with a natural voice and I enjoyed it.

Copy supplied for review. 

Amazon.com

Amazon UK

Smashwords

The Vampire Hunters Daughter by Jennifer Malone Wright – Review by Lindsay

2 Stars (that is generous)

I’m sorry to those who like this book, but I found it... pointless. This is just the start of a story. That is it. Nothing more and nothing less. Not original, not... anything. I’m sorry, I’m an author myself and I know harsh reviews can be upsetting, but we all get them. My MAJOR gripe is the fact that all these books are tiny. All part of the same story. All SOLD separately!! Well, rip-off. Just stating a fact here. If you have a story to tell, then tell it in a book, full length one, instead of expecting people to pay for pretty much a chapter or two at a time. Hell, what a way to make money. Hey, why doesn’t everyone do that?? Oh yeah, because we don’t rip off our fans! 

Can’t say anymore than that. Didn’t like it. Gave it two stars because I HATE giving 1 star reviews, and lets be honest, the cover is pretty. That’s it. Other than that, I'm glad I didn't spend money on it. 

Tales from a Mountain City by Quynh Dao - Review by Jane

3 Stars

Tales from a Mountain City gives us an insight into what life was like when the Communists moved in to Vietnam through the eyes of a fifteen year old girl. Normal life was turned upside down, people were forced to give up their homes and things would never be the same again. I could never imagine what it must have been like for those people or what it is like for any family caught up in a war zone, the fear is unimaginable.

Quynh Dao’s memoirs are not written in diary style like the famous Anne Frank. We are told a story based on fact with a large amount of family history thrown in between the horrors and the mundane.

Though the subject matter is very personal to the author and the story deserves to be told I did at times become a little distracted. What her mother grew in the garden was clearly an important memory, but for me it was a little dull to read about and I found it difficult to keep my attention on the book through some of the retellings of the day to day happenings.

I did however learn quite a bit, I had never understood anything about the Vietnam war. I didn’t know what it was about, why it happened or even when it happened. I am English and it isn’t a subject I was ever taught about in school or have ever really looked into since, so am grateful for the knowledge this book has given me.

Copy supplied for review

Amazon.com

Amazon UK

This week's Freebie Friday is Katherine Polillo's Destine

Jump aboard Anchor Group Publishing's Friday Freebie. Check out Katherine Polillo's book Destine. It is a fabulous read for Freebie Friday. Freebie Friday's are sponsored by Anchor Group. And remember, while you're downloading, click the:

Each like, tag, or review helps the author out. Your small chance to pay it forward. Happy reading!

“I am anxiously waiting for book two so I can see what happens next. ”S. Ford  |  8 reviewers made a similar statement

“The book was very well written and the pace was great. ”Cassie Hoffman  |  8 reviewers made a similar statement

“You will fall in love with Michelle, her determination to do what she needs to do. ”Cynthia Shepp  |  4 reviewers made a similar statement

Michelle Cross is an average, seventeen year old girl growing up in a small town in New Jersey. Up until her senior year, her life has consisted of a rather unglamorous existence. Her closet friend Cami has been by her side since kindergarten, she has a loving if somewhat absente father, and a mother who is unique to say the least. Michelle’s mother was diagnosed with schizophrenia when she was twelve years old, and ever since then she has had delusions of angels and demons battling over her only child. Michelle accepts her mother’s delusions as schizophrenic ramblings, until a handsome new boy finds her at school. Little by little Michelle’s world is turned upside down. The new boy claims to be the Archangel Gabriel cast from heaven, her best friend falls for the Antichrist, and come to find out Michelle’s mother has seen it coming all along. So instead of being consumed with prom and graduation, Michelle finds herself battling the evils of Hell in her small town. The four horsemen of the apocalypses have descended on her high school and with the help of Gabriel, her very own angel; she must stop the events leading to the apocalypse. What surprises Michelle even more than her role in saving humanity is the love that develops between Gabriel and herself. Can their love bridge the world between heaven and earth? Can Michelle stop the powers of Hell in time? Michelle and Gabriel find themselves the pawns in a very dangerous game between an ancient power with a mysterious message and Satan himself. Download your copy HERE! Katherine Polillo can be followed on Facebook.

Please DO Feed the Animals ZOO by Tabitha Short - Review by Lindsay

4 Stars

This is a very short horror story, consisting of around only 5000 words. However, the gore factor is there, the story is well written and overall a quick and entertaining read. Is it scary, sadly not. Far from it. But then, as people know, it takes a hell of a lot to scare me. I’m a horror fanatic, seen and read dozens upon dozens, so nothing is scary these days.

When I realized this was about a father and sons trip to a zoo, I thought, hmm, ok, what am I getting myself into. However, it is Unique, this is NOT your typical zoo, I never thought of anything like this before and I just wish it were longer. I like this authors writing style, its flows well, and even though its short and fast paced. You’re still able to visualise everything perfectly. 

Scars by Cheryl Rainfield - Review by Lindsay

4 Stars

I downloaded this book free from Amazon. This is kind of book I normally read, but something about it drew me in. 
I found this to be a very interesting read. The story is centred around Kendra. A young girl of 15 who is currently receiving therapy after being abused as a child. Kendra and her therapist are trying to find out who her abuser was, by rebuilding gaps in her memory and trying to get Kendra over her fear of this person, thus allowing her to open up more and learn his identity. There is an interesting cast of characters, all of whom are crucial in Kendra’s life. They help her to open up, to feel, and to be strong.

This book is told from Kendra’s point of view. The writing style is perfect for this sort of novel, and you do feel as though you are there with Kendra every step of the way. 

This book is based on real life events. So I believe this book will help others get through bad times. There are people who care and who are willing to help them through rough times, and listen to them sympathetically. More importantly, it will make them realise they are not alone.

Poppy the Proud by Emlyn Chand -Review by Jane

5 Stars

Poppy was a very proud peacock who enjoyed being the centre of attention. When the people visiting the park paid more attention to Snow, a new all white peacock instead of him, he tried his hardest to become more noticeable by doing all kinds of silly things.

This is the third book in the ‘bird brain’ series and is brightly illustrated with vocabulary that would suit all young children, and make an ideal bedtime read. The message in the story is that beauty comes from within and nicely includes a little taste of Indian culture.

I would highly recommend for all parents to share with their under sevens.

Copy supplied for review

Amazon.com

Amazon UK

Torn Together by Emlyn Chand - Review by Jane

4 Stars

Recovering from a romantic break-up Daly has lost direction in her life so her mum takes it upon herself to force a friendship between Daly and one of the young pregnant girls, Meghann, that she is helping at work. The pair soon become fast friends and it is on a shopping trip together that they meet Kashi, a young Indian man who soon becomes a very important part of Daly’s life.

Torn Together is a love story with a difference. Mixing a girl and a boy from different cultures brings its own set of problems. Daly being far more forward than your average Indian girl. While Kashi living in America still has his native ideals but is willing to forgo his families wishes for an arranged marriage and choose his bride through love instead. When the time came for Daly to meet Kashi’s family things were bound not to go well and I wasn’t surprised by their initial reaction to this very westernised girl. I wasn’t entirely happy with the pairing and there were parts of the story that infuriated me. I found Daly to be a little too pushy at times and where his family was concerned Kashi was too soft. The story took off in directions I didn’t expect and I enjoyed the emotional roller-coaster we were taken on.

Emlyn Chand shows us once again that she is a very able writer. Introducing a diverse set of characters, bringing them to life and allowing the reader to either like or dislike them. Both ethnic minorities and a young pregnant girl outcast by her family and school peers, were included in this story.

The formatting of the kindle version was very interesting. In keeping with the MC’s talent as an art student we were privy to numerous drawings, a nice touch I thought.

Copy supplied for review

Amazon.com

Amazon UK

This week's Freebie is The Brown House by Christy Sloat

Jump aboard Anchor Group Publishing's Friday Freebie. Check out Christy Sloat's book The Brown House. It is a fabulous read for Freebie Friday. Freebie Friday's are sponsored by Anchor Group. And remember, while you're downloading, click the:

Each like, tag, or review helps the author out. Your small chance to pay it forward. Happy reading!

“I look forward t more from Ms. Sloat and highly recommend this to anyone who is looking for a great ghost story to read over thesummer. ”abowling3  |  10 reviewers made a similar statement

“This was story has twists, turns, a few surprises and much more. ”JaimeCr  |  11 reviewers made a similar statement

“Just as things begin to fall into place the ending will leave you wanting more. ”sanders  |  7 reviewers made a similar statement Some secrets should never be revealed…

Brylee Branson begrudgingly made the excruciating move with her family from the warm sandy beaches of California to small town living in New Jersey. As if she wasn’t miserable enough, they’ve moved into a creepy old house that everyone in the area claims is haunted. Brylee dismisses the idea of ghosts and hauntings, until she begins to see and hear things that can’t be explained…

Brylee has no choice but to seek the help of new friends to unlock the secrets of this place she now calls home. But some secrets should never be revealed. Can the teens find a way to release the spirits imprisoned within the walls? Or will the curse claim them, too? Download the book HERE!Christy Sloat can be found on Facebook, Goodreads, or at her Blogspot.

No Ordinary Excuse by Michelle Adams - Review by Jane

4 Stars

Gemma Martin was a little forgetful, especially when it came to doing homework, but after a bad school report and a stern talking to Gemma promises her parents she will do better this term. On the first day back she suddenly remembers that the project she was supposed to do over the holidays was due in this morning and she hasn’t done it…not good! Trying to think of an excuse she hasn’t used before, Gemma finally comes up with a brilliant idea that probably takes more organising than doing her homework would have! No Ordinary excuse is suitable for children aged ten years and over.

Michelle Adams has a way with words that will appeal to young and old alike. Watching Gemma’s web of lies tangle and deepen was funny to say the least and let this be a lesson to all the kids out there who think making excuses will work…because it wont, grown ups have seen it all before…well maybe not ‘all’, this excuse is rather unique! Gemma’s plan doesn’t go quite according to plan and she finds it escalating out of control until the whole school is involved and eventually she has to suffer the humiliation of coming clean to everyone.

An interesting, feel good, fun book with an underlying message about not telling lies. It is well written with no obvious editing issues and I know my eleven year old daughter would enjoy this read…but hopefully not give her any ideas!

Copy supplied for review

AmazonUK

Amazon.com

There for You Giveaway

   Let me start by saying, thank you so very much for having me on your blog today! I am super excited to be here and announce a few things going on over at There for You Editing Services. And of course, when excited about something, I give something away. Makes sense, right? Ok, not really, but that's how it's going to be. First, my news!    We have a few new things going on over at There for You. The first thing ... lower prices! I now charge only $1.25 per page, in Word doc (12pt, 1.5 spaced) format. The second ... I now use beta readers, at no additional cost to you! I have 3 trusted beta's that I use, and pay for you. What does this mean, you might ask? Well, after I edit the book I send it off to the beta's. They read over the book, looking for anything that might have been missed, because unfortunately we all make mistakes, and the point out any inconsistencies in flow or story. The beta's have all been readers, and reviewers, for years ... the type of people you want reading the book. So basically, you will have extra sets of eyes looking over your book.    You are probably wondering what type of edit I do. When I edit I am looking for grammar, spelling, punctuation, and sentence structure errors, as well as the overall "flow" of the story. I never make a major change without first discussing with the author ... who I like to stay in close contact with during the time of edit. Also, in addition to all the above, during the time your book is being edited, you cover photo is There for You's profile picture and your Facebook author page is mentioned almost daily ... in hopes of moving some more traffic to your page.    Well, now that that's out of the way ... the giveaway! Here's what I am donating to the giveaway! First is an adorable bag, the perfect size to use as a Kindle or Nook holder!

See how much it fits the There for You and book world?! Well at least my world with the coffee and read :)) I'm also donating two bookmark/business magnet combo's.

In addition to the item's I've donated, many of the authors I've edited for have been kind enough to donate! So without further ado ... the rafflecopter! Oh, and if you're interested in using the editing services, or finding out more, I can be contacted at thereforyou.melissa@gmail.com or found on our Facebook page There for You Editing. Also, on the Facebook page, is covers photos of a few of the books I've edited. Thank you!A room without books is like a body without a soul. -Cicero

Interview with Jeanette Vaughan

Please welcome author Jeanette Vaughan. Jeanette has written numerous articles for newspapers and Journals as well as novel 'Flying Solo' (Read my Review)Thank you for appearing on the blog ~Jane

Q:- You seem to enjoy writing reality based fiction best. Do you ever see yourself writing a novel not based on reality?

J.V Sure, a great story is a great story. It takes powerful characters that you learn to love or hate, that generate drama. Much of the sequel to this story may not be based on reality, but fits the characters and ties them to the end.

Q:- After spending years being the 'perfect' wife, Nora from 'Flying Solo' eventually breaks free and shows how strong she is. Can you see yourself in that character?

J.V To some extent. When you think beyond the norm, that is unsettling to many. You are branded a renegade, as you mention. It takes strong people to relate to people who think outside the box. We admire them as heroes, but often it is hard for those closest to them to understand.

Q:- Recently I read and reviewed 'Flying Solo'. Do you have any previous books published or any works in the pipeline?

J.V I have published numerous articles in newspapers, journals of nursing and nursing magazines. I completed a full length screenplay about men in nursing, called Angel of Mercy for my Master's thesis in nursing. I have completed two other novels, in the works for publication. In addition i am working on a rock-opera for Broadway and of course, the sequel and final installment for FLYING SOLO. The sequel is called Solo Vietnam.  The end to the trilogy is called Trauma Queen.

Q:- Your writing career has spanned over 20 years. In your opinion do you see the era of e-readersto be a good or a bad thing as far as publishing books is concerned?

J.V I feel that any medium that brings the written word to the reader is GOLD. Reading should be the entertainment that expand the mind to endless possibilities. Not vedeo games. I am a bit old fashioned and love to turn a page. But for many, the ebook is the way to go. One only has to fight the pirates who are marketing your book without permission. 

My Review

Quick Fire-

Dresses or Jeans? Dresses.

Excersise Freak or Couch Potato? Couch potato.

Book or Film? Film.

Cat or Dog? Definitely dog!

Laptop or I-pad? Laptop.

Q:- If I told you my life story would you write a book about me? (I haven't done anything exciting though lol)

J.V If it is drama worthy, absolutely!

Q:- How much research goes into writing your books, Where do you gather the information, and how accurate do the facts have to be for you to write a 'reality based' story?

J.V Huge amount of research. I want to make sure everything from the food, to the social events to the locations are real. Especially the technical aspects. Whether it is military, or aviation, or medical. It just has to be right. I google, interview folks from that era, do field research (my personal fav) I like to experience the places I write about. For me, the more I can make it real for the reader, the better.

Q:- Is there anything you absolutely refuse to write about because of your beliefs or moral standing?

J.V There are some taboo topics....sure. I would absolutely draw the line at child porn. Because in the hands of some, it would fuel the sickness.

Q:- What is your typical writing routine?

J.V I write everyday. Whether on my blog, to friends with emails. On an outline or short story. If not writing, I am dictating in the car! Just gotta get all the stories out.

Q:- Do you have plans to write your autobiography?

J.V Who knows. I am only 50....lots more life to live. Ask me after I win the Oscar for my screenplay on FLYING SOLO!

Watch trailer here

AgeView Press

Amazon.com

Barnes and Noble
Book Depository
Abe Books UK

Don’t Ask Don’t Tell by T.R. Stoddard - Review by Jane

3 Stars

College student Rachel was looking for the perfect story to tell, so when she happened across an article about a new policy that some schools were adopting in order to stop any same sex relationships, she was so outraged that she decided to write her article about it. Disguised as a senior high school student Rachel goes under cover as Cassie and she soon sees first hand how shockingly discriminative the schools are acting

I did enjoy this story, the whole idea was interesting. I was so angry at the fact that schools could get away with ostracising minorities of any sort and that they were doing it so blatantly  was just terrible. I also feel a bit like Cassie where I want to drum it into people that we have no right to judge, everyone should be allowed to be themselves…providing what they are doing doesn’t hurt anyone else, and I just don’t understand why everyone can’t have the ‘live and let live’ attitude.

It is a shame that this book was let down by silly typo’s, missing letters repeated sentences, unnatural dialogue and unrealistic content. ‘You’ instead of ‘your,’ ‘as’ instead of ‘was,’ ‘through’ instead of ‘threw’ and ‘kept’ instead of ‘crept’ to name but a few…these kinds of errors are not acceptable or necessary in a published piece of work. There was a section where Zane was beaten-up by the bully, ‘Cryin’ Brian’ and was rescued by the ‘Goth’ boy Jeremy. This was fine until Jeremy went to the hospital with Zane and insisted on going home with him to stay the night in order to keep Zane awake because he had concussion  (inaccurate medical info) and even though Zane has a four year old sister, their mum was happy to let an unknown (to any of them) seventeen year old boy stay in the house over night. Following that, within just a couple of days their mum says she loves Jeremy as if he were her own. It was just too…’unrealistic’! Where was this mums sense of safety for her home and her children and if the treatment for concussion was (which it isn’t) to keep the patient awake all night, then surely the mum would want to do that herself and not trust the task to a random teen she had never met before...Ugh?

It is not all bad, because if you choose to ignore these irritating editing issues and the odd far fetched content, some of the writing style has a nice and easy flow to it, the story is good and not all the dialogue is unnatural, just some of it, and it is this fact that makes the lack of editing irritate me more! Please just take it back, re-edit and turn your good book into a great book.

Copy supplied for review.

Amazon.com

Amazon UK

This weeks freebie is More than Magic: Semester Aboard by Elizabeth Kirke

Jump aboard Anchor Group Publishing's Friday Freebie. Check out Elizabeth Kirke's book More than Magic: Semester Abroad. It is a fabulous read for Freebie Friday. Freebie Fridays are sponsored by  Anchor Group. And remember, while you're downloading, click the:

Each like, tag, or review helps the author out. Your small chance to pay it forward. Happy reading!

5.0 out of 5 stars So good I could not put it down. I love reading and I enjoy many different kinds of books, mostly paranormal YA romances. At least lately. The market is flooded with vampire books, werewolf books. Read more

5.0 out of 5 stars Just Crusin I loved this book. I would hope there will be a second book to this one .. I want to know if anything happens with jen and thomas . ts and dani and the others. Read more

5.0 out of 5 stars FAST PACED< VERY WELL WRITTEN I loved this book! It had everything paranormal possible in it!! Vampires, Witches, Werewolves, Mermaids, Fire Elemental, Water Elemental, Wizards, just everything you can think... Read more

Jen is looking forward to spending an entire summer studying abroad on a cruise ship and she knows the experience will change her life. Then she sees something she wasn't supposed to see, something she can't explain. Jen finds herself thrust into a world she never knew existed and her life will change more than she imagined. That is, if she can survive the dangers lurking on the ship.

Download your free copy:HERE 

You can follow Elizabeth Kirke via Facebook, Goodreads, or her Blog